Not the typical beginnings of what all believe will be a bloody battle.
However, typical lost all meaning when this strange world pulled the six high-school students into it.

Re-edited in 2019

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Pre-editing: style 72%spelling100%grammar 77%overall 83%
Post-editing: style 72%spelling100%grammar 97%overall 90%
Final summary: style 92% spelling 100%grammar 97%overall 96%

Notes:
Grammar lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of employing excess introductory/gerund clauses, which makes for faster reading.
Style lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of an abundance of introductory/gerund clauses that makes for faster reading. As a result, these books use 10% to 15% fewer coordinators. Style will all be subjective to both the reader and the writer.
Summary: the pre-edit score of 83% increased to 90%. The remaining is based primarily on style. Is it perfect? No, but statistically speaking and taking into account style, it is 96%+ correct.
Please keep in mind that not all of the recommendations were correct, thus I omitted them.

Dialog: 44.30%
Dialog tagged: 14.40%
Passive index: 3 (target < 25)
Felsch Reading Ease: 82 (Target >60)
Glue index: 45.1% (target <40%)
Easy to read paragraphs: 1815 (96%)
Less Easy paragraphs to read: 62 (3%)
More difficult paragraphs to read: 11 (1%)
400 adverbs (271 outside of dialog) & only 4 are used more than 10 times
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