(The Dark-Matter Chronicles (Phractured, Phragmented, & Phyrrhic) are now released – see my author page for easy viewing.) An army stages: waiting to invade. While an alliance has been forged with the dwarves, the whereabouts of the elves are unknown. The only good news is that the Destroyer of Armies, Tranquil Fury, has possessed Eric, the high school jock and bully.

Not the typical beginnings of what all believe will be a bloody battle.
However, typical lost all meaning when this strange world pulled the six high-school students into it.

Re-edited in 2019

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Pre-editing: style 72%spelling100%grammar 77%overall 83%
Post-editing: style 72%spelling100%grammar 97%overall 90%
Final summary: style 92% spelling 100%grammar 97%overall 96%

Notes:
Grammar lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of employing excess introductory/gerund clauses, which makes for faster reading.
Style lost 20% for the following reasons: My modifications (as, because, En-dashes, & Em-dashes), and a stylistic choice of an abundance of introductory/gerund clauses that makes for faster reading. As a result, these books use 10% to 15% fewer coordinators. Style will all be subjective to both the reader and the writer.
Summary: the pre-edit score of 83% increased to 90%. The remaining is based primarily on style. Is it perfect? No, but statistically speaking and taking into account style, it is 96%+ correct.
Please keep in mind that not all of the recommendations were correct, thus I omitted them.

Dialog: 44.30%
Dialog tagged: 14.40%
Passive index: 3 (target < 25)
Felsch Reading Ease: 82 (Target >60)
Glue index: 45.1% (target <40%)
Easy to read paragraphs: 1815 (96%)
Less Easy paragraphs to read: 62 (3%)
More difficult paragraphs to read: 11 (1%)
400 adverbs (271 outside of dialog) & only 4 are used more than 10 times

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